Yes, I was really happy to read that someone also thought of better ways to improve upon the same joke. I think that example you wrote sounds like a great idea.
I myself thought a much better idea than throwing "Swim Cop" out in the monologue would have been Phelps arguing with Lorne about doing a "Swim Cop" sketch around a pool set or having the different actors suggesting other "Pool Veterinarian" type sketches.



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